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Audiogeist
Sharon Harriott
United Kingdom, London

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Newman Passage

One, two, three, four,
they`re pissing in the corridor.
I saunter through Newman Passage,
avoiding rivulets on the floor.

Short skirts, lit fags,
they`re breathing in the smokey plumes.
I stumble through Newman Passage,
avoiding retching in the fumes.

Five, six, seven, eight,
the cobbled stones do cut and grate.
I shuffle through Newman Passage,
avoiding libertines, i`m a state.

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Mirozi Comment by: Mirozi - 2008-01-30 18:58
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I have a hard time understanding poetry, it's not my thing usually. It's rare I find a piece I like, and you are rare my friend. I mean that in a good way. Very good rhythm, and good flow. I liked it.
CrackaZach Comment by: CrackaZach - 2008-01-29 20:06
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beat poetry with complex simplicity
snap snap
Mick Comment by: Mick - 2008-01-29 02:55
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Nice piece. Has a very rhythmical feel about it.
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2008-01-28 02:20
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Lol! ;)
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-27 20:15
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This is a real catchy poem, Sharon. Has a real biographical feel, and I’m betting it pretty much is.
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