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jesscat
Jessica Muni
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Identify the Enemy: Ready, Aime, Fire

Sometimes I think

my calling is the anger
of the generations
fierce souls crawling
for some other's desperation

we don't fear anymore
we don't cringe away from pain
we're terribly free
half hoping to be slain

My pen on the canvas
is the blood we bleed
and bleed we will
if it plants a good seed

So tear at me, pain
but my arm still moves
slashing these pages
like the beating of hooves

You thought you had me in a corner
thought I was afraid to die
Fear will never move my lips
to utter out a lie

And as I watch my blood drops
I smile, cuz I see
It plants a blossom for me
and a fire unto thee

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jesscat Comment by: jesscat - 2008-03-21 17:25
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The reason I named this poem Define the Enemy ect... is because a lot of the time I think people feel this intense anger, and strong will to get revenge, but they don't understand where to take it out on. So they take it out on other people, which in the end, becomes hypocritical, giving strength to the real enemy. So its important, when you feel that rage, to stop and think. "Aime" is french for love.... right? maybe i should make sure. but, the point is... fight evil. you have that justice in you for a reason, to fight, but just make sure you know who you are fighting. It takes the most strength and courage to love. greatest weapon.
Silver Blood Comment by: Silver Blood - 2008-03-11 13:00
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i see amazing purpose in this poem and the determination that such must be written. its the kind of feeling that gives one insperation.
tweety Comment by: tweety - 2008-03-10 04:04
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Excellent way to put the enemie in it's place, I love how the words given us are used as a wepon of protection like a double edged sword,

Great writing, it's the kind of writing that connects to it's reader on such a deeper level then the flesh.

thanks for that.
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