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7thSon
Seventh Son
United Kingdom

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When I Sleep

There can be days when things are so good
When everything works, as it should
The odd ache and pain to be understood
Trying to recall, if only I could…

Bending and stretching not a good thing
Reaching and running, I’d rather sing
The kettle is whistling on the gas ring
Will I be around to see the new King ?

It’s not so bad on a day to day
Photo albums, things I meant to say
Remembering music we used to play
Forgetting the gas bill I have to pay

Life will continue even when I sleep
New generations, fortunes to reap
Marriages with lots more secrets to keep
Perhaps hills to climb, not seeming so steep

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lancslass Comment by: lancslass - 2008-03-20 19:38
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I just re-read this and the first line of the third stanza is clear as day. Sorry, I didn't read it right the first time. I didn't 'see' it. Can't imagine why.
lancslass Comment by: lancslass - 2008-01-28 19:33
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Are you missing a word, 'like' perhaps, in the first line of the third stanza?
I particularly enjoy your work because so often you write things I relate to, usually with a touch of sadness. I like the way you reminisce with words that make great pictures. I went through a bit of an arc with this one though, and am left with a hopeful feeling from the last line. Good Read.
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