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crackednotbroken
Identity Crisis
United States, Texas

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Missing You

Missing You

A Poem by Identitycrisis

Missed you more
last night it seems
I cried and yearned
for nights we never
held each other
When lost and hurt feelings
Made my heart quiver
Uptight,subconcious
battle of inner thoughts
and feelings

Mixed up world
frightening images
Broken, angry And sad
felt the same blue and that
missin' you, has been like
a thousand rainy days
and nights, sharp
Like cold winter
Mysteries of life
twisting balance and justice

Then closer together
finally, and hours of pleasure
Frozen in tme, for a moment
Not the last time, forever?
In this life, mine
Wishing to travel in time..
closer in time
But I will always..
I'll love you still..
until the end of time

© 2008 Identitycrisis

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Comment by: - 2008-01-27 17:07
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Very touching piece, it was well written. Being a person who has very close friends and family in 5 different countries and about 12 different cities I can relate to this piece.
Very well done!!
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-27 10:34
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Very well written...I can relate...thanks for sharing it :)
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