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Arley
Arley Owens, Jr.
United States, Texas, Midland

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Cruel Wind (Silver/Karjon 24)

Everywhere she looked she saw silvery bolts of lightning torturing the hail-pelted prairie as funnels of swaying devils approached from the distance. Rain-soaked tresses whipped her face like angry serpents as Myra ran.

Bolting the hatch to shield himself from a windy death, father refused her entrance. He feared being pulled out, and screamed it was nobody's fault but hers she'd gotten there too late. Her tearful pleas wasted precious time and her knuckles bled from beating on the unyielding portal.

Deafening howls of the wrathful squall announced the arrival of the first tormenter. God in heaven, a tractor just flew past. Myra fell to earth, desperately clutching handfuls of Bermuda, praying she'd be spared.

If her head had been forced into the exhaust of a jet engine at maximum power, the shrieking couldn't have been any louder or more frightfully piercing. The grass uprooted and she got sucked into the whirling sky. With her last breath she prayed something heavy would fall on the cellar door and turn cowardly father's shelter into a tomb.

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Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-31 10:06
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Ouch, I forgot the NO WEATHER rule, heh heh. Ha - I really accomplished something with this if I got you praying, Karen. Thanks!
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-01-31 06:40
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Oooh - nice guy, eh?

I was so tempted to say, 'So, you're starting with the weather, then?' Hahaha...

But, of course, in this story the weather is the catalyst for the whole plot. Really nice descriptions and I love that last line - I'm praying with her (me? praying?).

Cheers

Karen
thelonelyguy Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-30 14:50
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I reckon that how they should teach kids English (or any other language) - creative swearing!
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-30 05:15
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“Purple spitting mushroom”, huh? Now there’s a visual, heh heh.
thelonelyguy Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-29 20:58
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Aussie's are a bit like the Poms. We love throwing words together into a soup.

When I was a kid, my mother told me and my brother not to swear. So from that day on, we joined words innocent together into disgusting combinations. Technically we weren't swearing, but phrases like "purple spitting mushroom" and "Hot beefy love flange" were definitely pushing the realms of good taste.
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