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leoline28
Lisa Herrman
United States, OR, Springfield

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The Differences

The differences, oh monumental.
Simple! Your heat to my chill
In this tiny place, still
I hardly think it's accidental.

Without eyes I know you
Your voice deep above me, beckons
We couldn't have met with
the delay only seconds.

I lingered, you hurried
now I wait thoughtless as you ponder.
Snow covers your tracks.
And my hope silently flounders.

Stolen life, stolen girl
So different that you would be taken
The sweet plan has unfurled
I an accomplice in the making.

"Make me yours," is the whisper
The bondage released.
Yes, the differences looming and towering
When I feed the differences vanish.

Your heat to my chill
Not a drop will I spill.

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leoline28 Comment by: leoline28 - 2008-01-29 06:49
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I'm thinking it would read "Simple! Your heat to my chill" Might be cleaner?
Comment by: - 2008-01-27 22:50
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The art of knowing, without eyes, I know you.
intuition or predestination?
second line first stanza, i do not read it cleanly. is that intentional?
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