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theenigmama
claudia c
United States, FL, Fort Myers

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Fodder - Part II

Your hands
Pressed firmly
To the small of my back
Mine on your chest
Gazing upward
Our eyes meet
And lock
A breath held
A moment frozen
Then lips
And hips
And a tangle
Of longing unfurled
Then a breath held
A moment frozen
A tender touch
To my face
A sweet whisper
Like a dream
Dangling in my ear
My head
Resting perfectly
On your chest
The smell of us
Lingering
Our legs entwined
Our minds
At ease
A breath held
A moment frozen

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DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-01-28 11:03
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Unproductive if your frozen.
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