Alexzan Burton
United States, Missouri, Springfield

Words:	31
Access:	Public
Comments:	5

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Candy Lips

Vicious beauty
dispels rumors
and makes you

A non-believer.

Hushed voices whisper
secrets in the dark

Behind my shimmering eyelids

You penetrate
My soul.

Love me

Like kisses
from
Candy lips

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Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2008-01-29 20:01

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Okay, good =)

Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-29 19:59

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yeah, that was a good mmmmmm. I'm sure you'll know when it's a bad one...

Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2008-01-29 19:08

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Well I am glad that I can raise imagery...whatever it may be

And given the 'mmm', can I assume that my style is a good thing?

Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-29 17:44

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Mmmm, you do have a style.

I'm not thinking of dolphins, but if it works...

Comment by: AlabasterKane - 2008-01-29 16:50

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It makes me think of a morbid dolphin giving a Valentine to an octopus. Don't ask why, but thats what I picture in my head.

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