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Merrily Me
Meryl Leiber
United States, Missouri

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How Can I Say Goodbye?

This is how God works, and this is what He planned,
And against His will, the Saldania’s won’t stand.
We may not understand what God’s going to do,
But He has told us that it’s best for me and you.
We took them for granted, and always thought they’d stay.
We may cry and ask God why, but it’s got to go His way.
So we won’t hold them back; we’ll let them move on,
And we won’t forget what they’ve taught us after they’re gone.

Just wanted to say thanks.

September 5, 2003

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wewerethere1 Comment by: wewerethere1 - 2008-01-29 23:11
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Wow. This is certainly incredible. I love how the rhymes didn't stop the flow of the poem because I believe rhyming is the most difficult thing ever. It is sad and yeah sad. Thanks so much for sharing. Love your message in this poem.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-29 20:26
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Very well written I love it...we really dont know what God has in store for us until it has hit us in the face hummmm...Thanks for sharing this :)
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