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Shirine Aouad
Canada, Quebec, Montreal

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Severin's dream, Venus of the North

The light footstep of decadence
Treading along swarming toils
With a satin slipper
Trails in the dust
A shimmering spell

Hair in disarray
Exuberantly shaking off
The cloth from her shoulder
She inspires the luxury of negligence
And exhumes the flawed, drunken superego
One with the illusion
As long as it lasts

Her ermine-lined coat
Carelessly thrown by the foot of the bed
You'll soon discover her absence
From the entangled circumstances
You've both wrought

The contamination a cage
The abrupt fall public
A circus animal, wielding a whip of straw
Yellow as gold

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vikrammohindru Comment by: vikrammohindru - 2008-02-06 16:18
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Amazing ... loved it ... keep writing n sharing
Mick Comment by: Mick - 2008-01-31 23:57
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Love the first stanza... Beautifully written and full of wonder. The whole piece is striking. Yet again I am left to ponder on the meaning of your work. But that is what I love about it... :)
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-30 10:33
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Interesting It made me think I like that thanks for sharing this :)
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