Wellington New Zealand -Syllable Pyramidal Challenge
Here
This place
Heavy with rain
Wind cascaded
Small of populace
Lofty hillside grandeur
Beehive, Zoo and cable car
Botanic Gardens and the like
Karori Sanctuary with the birds
St Gerard’s Cathedral oriental bay
Cafes, takeaways, steakhouses, diners and caravans
Bakeries and delicatessens
Warehouse bargains guaranteed
Bucket fountain Cuba mall
Where earthquakes kick ass
Harbour City
Wellington
My home
Here
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wow, this so totally reminds me of wellington (were i lived for 9 months last year). the only landmarks missing was the reverse bungy on courtney place, the museum and the zebra print hostel on tory street.
thanks for a slice of memory. |
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I'd love to visit, too. New Zealand, home of hobbits, elves, flight of the conchords, kiwis, Leslie Blackwell, and probably some other stuff.
Can you put all of EditRed up on a poetry weekend, Les.
Just a count on syllables -
1 2 4 4 5 6 7 8 10 11 14 9 7 7 5 4 3 2 1 = syllable counts.
But that's just being technical and you 'did' get the last and first word to match - so bonus points there.
Loved the content, but now feel like leaving wet, cold UK and heading South East to Aukland (land of the Auks)
I only wish I had a passport
Grae:) |
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Comment by: GLWard - 2008-01-30 23:15
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Great- now I want to go visit!
Great job with the challenge. It isn't always easy getting these things just right. Gotta warn you, though- they are a bit addicting. |
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