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cantrall
Rob E
United States, AZ, Tempe

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Alone in a Crowded Room

Alone in a crowded room

Who's the blind one?
Who's the deaf one?
Who's the mute one?

Teach me to see..
Teach me to hear..
Teach me to scream..

Then I'll know.
Will you?

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frankman Comment by: frankman - 2008-02-05 09:02
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Short and straight. Nice work. But the last line, I dont like it. No need, I think.
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