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nonalienabductee
Niccole Segura
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United States, Pennsylvania/Ohio

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I do not love


the period,


which only chooses


to force an ending,


nor the question mark,


which yields no answers,


or the exclamation point,


shrieking for attention


like a spoiled child.


The comma always wants more.


The semi-colon thinks


too highly of itself.


The apostrophe wants to replace


what was lost


but cannot manage it,


and the hyphen doesn’t care what I do,


as long as I keep going.


 


Instead, let me be enfolded


by the comforting embrace


of the parentheses,


who shelter each addendum


like a beloved sister,


in warmth and silence and peace.


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Nora Comment by: Nora Online- 2008-02-05 22:21
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Wow, Niccole. I really like this. I never ascribed personality to diacritical marks before, and now I don't have to. Clever. It's good.
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-02-05 20:09
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This would be a great Language Arts lesson for a teacher to help a child remember their grammar.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-02-05 19:48
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Very cleverly written. A unique view. Enjoyed the read.
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