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7thSon
Seventh Son
United Kingdom

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Tritina challenge #9

Lots of wonderful things to try
Most certainly before I die
Cruises,climbing, even snake charming

I may meet my prince charming
Here we go, I can but try
Hopefully before I die

The last on my list is die
Often exclaimed, oh charming !
The list full of things to try

A new mantra to adopt, try, die, charming.

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alien Comment by: alien Online- 2008-02-13 08:30
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This poem can be developed more, I think. You need to take some of the ideas you've found here and expand them to give this poem more of a meaning.

But then, it wouldn't be a tritina anymore, obviously. However - if it ends up as a brilliant poem in some other form, I've done my job by giving you a starting point which is what this compatition is all about :D
tjnelson Comment by: tjnelson - 2008-02-11 06:59
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like this ! Lilting, expansive...and full of hope.
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-02-07 07:23
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Interesting. It kinda makes you think and smile at the same time. Excellent!
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