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JanetteeStory
Janettee McCrary
United States, Oklahoma, Oklahoma City

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Peacocks

This was written during a poetry class at OU.
Written 08/06/99

Beautiful bird:
Blue and green feathers stand tall.
Shaking your feathers,
Attracting your mate to you.
Peacocks are such pretty birds.

©1999 Janettee Younger

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-02-10 18:59
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A very good observation of how a female attracts a male. Very true to life! Best wishes.
Comment by: - 2008-02-10 04:12
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short and simple but gets the point across. Peacocks are very beautiful birds, especially that females.
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