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FENELLA
florabel de los santos
Philippines, lucena,city

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A Chat Tale...

Jai kumar: Once upon a time there was a dark forest.inside the forest
Jai kumar: is it trilling
FLORA: crazy
jai kumar: u want me 2 continue!
FLORA: go
FLORA: ok
FLORA: tell
jai kumar: there was a pretty girl sitting under a apple tree
FLORA: aha
FLORA: waiting
jai kumar: her name is florabel
FLORA: huh?
jai kumar: now she is hearing story from a indian boy
FLORA: and
jai kumar: that time Indian national animal Tiger came
jai kumar: florabel weeped a lot save me... save me..
.jai kumar: h...e...l....p.....
FLORA: and then?
FLORA: what?
FLORA: any prince to save her life??
jai kumar: ya but no prince came but_______________
jai kumar: superman
FLORA: who is that superman?
jai kumar: i also really dont no_____
FLORA: why?
jai kumar: bcoz he was wearing mask
FLORA: not superman maybe zorro..
jai kumar: now its ur turn to continue the story
FLORA: then superman came.
.jai kumar: Hello? I know you're there. I can see you!
jai kumar: u have 2 continue dear
FLORA: he get that pretty florabel from danger...
jai kumar: mmmm
FLORA: she wants to say thanks to him...and ask "please let me know the real you"...
FLORA: superman let florabel know his real personality..
jai kumar: then
FLORA: he throw away his mask...
FLORA: she discoverd that he is a man by the name of...
FLORA: JAI
jai kumar: Happy
FLORA: she thanked her...a leave him a sweet kiss on his lips..
FLORA: him
FLORA: tanked him
FLORA: and after that...superman fly again...
FLORA: far..far...so far from her...
FLORA: there is no happy ending
FLORA: cause the end is on it's FATE!
FLORA: ok??
FLORA: nice story...
jai kumar: i belive that somday superman will return
jai kumar: and they will live happily everafter

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