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Basil
Basil Janssens
Belgium, Antwerp, somewhere

Words: 60
Access: Public
Comments: 5

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Poetry with a tale

I’m not afraid of you,
Just lay your head on my chest.
As I stroke your hair you look into my eyes,
Wanting more,…searching for my hand when I stop.
Your mouth moves closer to my head,…
A first touch of your tongue on my cheak,
I just smile , knowing this is your way of showing your love,…

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edgarallanpoet Comment by: edgarallanpoet - 2008-06-24 10:48
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I totally knew it was a dog. Great job! Dogs really are great. Unconditional love always!
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2008-02-23 01:02
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Before I read your comment I knew you were talking about a dog. I have 4 dogs myself and I know exactly what you paint here in this poem. A lovely piece...
Mick Comment by: Mick - 2008-02-14 00:44
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lol... Is it only puppy love?
BooBear Comment by: BooBear - 2008-02-13 10:28
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hahahaha... It's a good thing you put that side note that it's a dog. (By the way... cheek)

God job Basil and I love dogs too.
Basil Comment by: Basil - 2008-02-12 00:56
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For those who wander: it's a dog,...just to show how much I like dogs,..:-)
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