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marinarena
Marie C
United States, CA, La Habra

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Blame it on M

Maybe it's the moon
that makes me loony

Maybe because of Monday
I become melancholy

Maybe it's besmirched meat
that makes me miserable

Maybe it's due to the mailman
why my messages don't get through

Maybe it's due to the meteorologist
why a dismal monsoon is in my forecast

Maybe it's the meterman
who always reads me falsely

Maybe because of men
I repress myself back

Maybe it's menstruation
why I feel frustration

Or- maybe it is merely me
meandering in this moment

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michellecoes Comment by: michellecoes - 2008-03-30 17:28
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i agree with mick...nice alliteration, though, im not sure that it all flowed
Mick Comment by: Mick - 2008-02-14 00:40
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Nice alliteration... :)
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