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Stephie
stephanie anderson
United States, TN, Clarksville

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Regret

You lay your quick horses in my lap;
I think of how I would rather sleep,
but I say nothing aloud:

I don't believe in being pretty anymore
or know why I watch you read in bed.
We are simple:

There is nothing between us,
we are merely skin -
little-trained of more.

I shift my head,
see the compliments of the lamp's shine
strong against the light and dark of your face-

I want to lay against your back,
and urge your horses to gallop.
Instead, I give you my back.

We close our books and eyes -
I want to be beautiful,
but I say nothing aloud.

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aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2008-02-17 11:10
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I can read this one over and over. I seem to find something new in it everytime. I love how your writing has turned. You take moments, freezing them and yet giving them so much life at the same time. I find myself thinking of this poem at strange times of the day. "the light and dark of your face." It's beautiful and strong.
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2008-02-15 02:25
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A good poem about the emptiness of a comfort relationship. Nice turn of expression.
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