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amber3212
Amber M
United States

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unheard whispers

the unheard whispers
that seek the light
are all locked up
kept inside
searching for something
to prove
that the attic
is no place
for them
to live their life
a life of uncertainty
a life with no key
to unlock
the truth
of what they believe

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DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-02-12 19:22
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Interesting, a engaging read.
wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-02-12 17:13
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Don't know why but this doesn't have your usual lyrical flow somehow
love the words though
(remember i'm trash at poetry!)
xxx geo
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