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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
United States, WA, Seattle

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Can You Dance?

Yeah, you can turn smiles
into a river of tears
You're gifted that way~

You can shatter a spirit
beyond mending
with words cruel
and unrelenting~

Now that's!
a real God given talent~

And yeah
you can suck the very
life blood out of a
body's red hot veins~

But ...
...can you dance?

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard - 2008-08-06 14:35
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Thank you ladies~I 'ppreciate it!
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-08-06 10:55
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Cynical and world-weary. Luv it.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-06 07:09
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Heartbroken truth my girl, dig it! B
AlabasterKane Comment by: AlabasterKane - 2008-02-12 16:32
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I dig this one a lot. Direct and sarcastic, Love it...:)
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