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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Talk To Me Pretty

‘You are lovely, so beautiful,
I don't know how this started,
but I don't want it to end
I want to know you,
I want us to know each other’
and so …
… it begins...

‘Life has tied me up lately,
but I've missed you baby
You have stolen my heart
Oh, such sweet words spoken
nourishment to a love starved soul’
and so …
… it goes...

'Sorry I missed you,
had to work late,
hope to catch you tomorrow,
going out to the bar tonite with friends
but I'll be thinking of you, really’
and so …
… it begins...

‘Hey hi baby! Sorry I haven't been around
work you know, it’s a bitch,
so busy, just can't seem to catch up,
did spent time with old friends catching up though...
oh, but I really missed you, how are you?’
and so …
… it ends...

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-21 09:24
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Oye vey. You're right Wanda! I will fix that one asap!
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-07-21 09:22
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His attention span was short! lol
His loss.
I also like the "it begins--it goes--it ends" format. Nice detail.

psst--need a beginning quote on stanza three :)
Forgot to fix a typo on a poem posted once, then sent it out to a magazine. It was accepted and printed.

Later someone pointed out the typo on the post and I almost had a stroke. Luckily I had fixed it before mailing--but it took 10 years off my life.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-18 13:19
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You CAN have both Tony. Unfortunately some people don't seem to recognize that....
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-07-18 09:39
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The guy must have been a meathead. Why not have both A? I think I'd have a six-pack at home; the other guys can make their own entertainment. Lol
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-16 20:50
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Thank you Matt...I wrote that over a year ago after watching that cycle....sad story line that continues as energetically as a bad soap opera yes?
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