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Kalin
Stavros Dimitriou
Greece

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The Ashen Assassin

“I once saw an Ashen Assassin walk past me calmly, I stared at his silhouette, tattoos and piercings for a while, then turned to continue my way and saw a man in the other direction a few meters away, with eyes wide open, looking down to his torso. His chest was so badly cut and torn and his heart missing. He seemed panting to the realization he was already dead” –Eleif Khijair, Merchant of Sundar

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Kalin Comment by: Kalin - 2008-02-15 03:01
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Thank you.
Your description was exactly what I was going for.
I guess this one was successful :)
qpeedore Comment by: qpeedore Online- 2008-02-14 17:52
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Great. Nice descriptions, and they make sense too. Makes me marvel at the swiftness of the assassin. Almost as if he were a superhero that I can be amazed at his powers. This is short, but it really doesn't need to be a word longer.
Kalin Comment by: Kalin - 2008-02-13 16:16
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Thx Jane :)
I do write poetry sometimes, but I get frustrated as I write better in Greek than in English :P
I'll post some one of these days
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-02-13 15:12
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Great image. Have you thought of writing poetry?
Kalin Comment by: Kalin - 2008-02-13 14:32
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Thanks,
I'm toying with horror that could be used in fantasy fiction lately. All comments are welcomed and hopefully will help me learn to fit all ends :)
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