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missymegs21
Meghan Meghan
United States, IL, Chicago

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Gold Speckled Dust Sprinkle, Dip my Chocolate Tongue

I've been poisoned and my belly is swelling over you, bathing in brown and gold speckled dust sprinkle. The burning in my nostrils makes me think of sea salt spray and green tea. I've begun a map of unbound sentences creating a non-plausible fantasy to divert me from the real you. Angry lights seep beyond our ceiling expanse and it has finally dawned on me, things really have changed around here.

I've been waiting an eternity to jump from this room of jagged fragments and obtuse explanations. There is all but fertile conception suffocating in this haphazard square of off-white. Bring me back to where safe is a color not a feeling. Uncomplicated un-looping simplicity, amazing rhymes and soft whispers, toothy smiles laced with apple pie lips, electric blue band-aids with starry dreams, young fingers with old wrinkles. Fade me before I lose myself to the ground, rotting has never much appealed to me.

I wish, one more smile, one more kiss, cloudy eyed, love long with dry lips, and a never want to leave type of goodbye. Sadly, I doubt you could recognize your own invasion if given red tongued directions, too bad, I'm curious to see where these sprinkles might have landed us.

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-02-15 13:36
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You create pictures that have never appeared in my head before. Somehow your words kiss me. They make so much fun, sparkling and transcendent.
I always smile and feel myself welling up at the same time. Magical, always magical.
'I'm curious to see where these sprinkles might have landed us'.
I'm sitting here on the other side of the planet with tears in my eyes...x
edgarallanpoet Comment by: edgarallanpoet - 2008-02-13 17:46
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This is brilliant sister. Great flow to it too. It was like swimming through your conscience for a minute. The sentiment and humor here was wonderfully enlightening as well. Love Love it!
Kalin Comment by: Kalin - 2008-02-13 14:23
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wow!
The sensuous and hungry side of love's potential never seemed more fun!

I'll be reading you Meghan
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