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michi0
Michelle. .
United States, california

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Simply you pt.2

I can't expect you to understand words that are meaningless to you.
Im just another girl to you.
Just another person left unspoken and unseen.
Simply you, you're the venom that my heart takes in,
yet its malicious purpose cant kill me.
Your gracious love has me captivated, despite the fact that you left.
"Hurt" is no comparison to what I'm left as.
Falling for you came too easily,
But im forced to find my way out of this impossible maze called love.

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sickSAM Comment by: sickSAM - 2008-02-14 10:44
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"venom that my heart takes in" that says it right there. over and over knowing just how painful love really is
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-02-14 06:19
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Wow. Incredible. You got to the heart of hurt. Keep going. You could write a longer piece and find many more readers.
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