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Shreyass
Shreyass Rajagopalan
United Arab Emirates

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Greatness in Simplicity

'What shall I become when I grow up?',
Asked an innocent son of the Father,
Sitting in his lap.
'Why, a carpenter, like me!'
He replied proud, no hesitation in his voice.

The son thought,
And scrambled down from his Father's lap.
'But I want to be more,
A nobleman,
King or Emperor, atleast that!'

The father gently picked him up,
And settled him upon his knee,
A lesson in life lay in wait.
'In the humblest of Man's work, my son,
Is the greatest of God's work done.'

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sheangel13 Comment by: sheangel13 - 2008-03-12 16:15
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I really like how simple this is written. The message is the same as well. The story is short, but written beautifully. Reminds me of reading Proverbs or a short story to bring a person back to the Truth in reality.

Beautiful.
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