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Wow, I love the last stanza, and the 'cigarette allotments of time'. You're a really good writer, It's partly because what I've read so far have been things that have been a part of my life, but your style is remarkable, it's edgy without lacking intelligence and grace like most writers that try to be edgy. E-Mail me when you write something new, I don't want to miss it.
