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Never Knew
Walter stared blankly into his beer as he sat on the deck out back. He could faintly hear his daughter and her children closing their car doors and pulling out of the driveway. It was the first time he had been alone since he buried his wife two days prior. He desperately wanted some time away from the grief and condolences. Time to think.
“What’s the plan? What the Hell are you going to do with yourself now, you old son of a bitch?” he asked himself.
In forty-five years of marriage, Walter had always been in charge, but Claire had always been the motivation. Before her, he aspired to and accomplished nothing. He always pretended to be strong and driven, but she was his strength and direction.
She never knew how much she really was to him. And he never knew regret until he realized that.
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Comment by: Jorbian Online- 2008-05-06 23:13
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| You are a master. This was masterful. That is the only way which this can be described as. |
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| It makes you think, I enjoy the imagery in it. You wrote it so that they few descriptions you did give showed so much! |
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| Uncharacteristic of you, and thus, so disarming. |
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| I love it. Many people definitely do this or something similar in the same situation. It's a good look into the mind of what's left of a great relationship when death sadly intervenes. |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-02-18 13:26
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| Well, aren’t you Mister Versatile? Very good, and damn sad, Mitch! If you had any glitches they got past me. |
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