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wizzer
geordie carew
Australia

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That Woman

The traffic lights trapped us yet again.

“Quick! Wind up your windows!”

Dressed to catch the eye, purple stretch slacks girdled her belly. Lime green sandals bobbled with doohickeys to tone in with the lime green in her floral shirt. Her grey roots needed touching up but the platinum blonde idea was intact, with a lime green cutiepie slide holding up a drooping wing of hair. Bright red lippy slashed across her mouth, as rheumy eyes picked us out from among the cars waiting for the lights to change.

The children giggled nervously, with eyes wide open, as she knocked on our window.

‘Got any cigarettes?”

Why she scared me I’ll never know, but as I drove off I flung a fistful of change on the road, resolving never to drive that way again.

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wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-10-11 17:34
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thanks count!..... i think
xg
Comment by: - 2008-10-11 08:33
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Vhere Iss theese place?
I vant to drife my batmobile thair.
To solicitate and fornicate her vonton desire.
ME...........
COUNT DRECULA !!
wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-04-21 20:13
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sorry i've missed Office Space.
thankyou for your comments
i'm still haring about (not writing anything) but feel the urge for finger percussion on the keyboard creeping up again if i ever get the time of course!
xxx geo
bounarjaf Comment by: bounarjaf - 2008-04-21 15:52
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Another well-written and enjoyable piece. Have you ever seen Office Space? It reminds me a bit of that scene at the beginning with Michael Bolton.
wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-03-16 21:38
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thankyou! busy not writing at the moment i'm afraid other stuff to do for the moment hoiping to get back SOON.
it's like living with A whole population of menopausal people (hot flushes that just don't stop!) yep thinking tasmania may be nice!
xxg
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