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winters moon,winters wind
Deep blue night
amber glows line the oak trees
winter is lost
gapped curtains
warm sun shining
puppy tails wagging
smal child giggles
laundry's spinning
nap time
winters chill
leaves tremble
heavy eyes
leaves tremble
in the winters chill
sleeps vacation
melancholy headache
soothing music
stuck by a train
warm brown eyes glowing
soft skin
eternal love
sniffing dogs
out of car windows
following the day
stiff language
reluctance follows
on a windy day
libby,reese,jyn,
three pretty voices
one ear short
eyelids drooping
anxiety growing
winters wind lingers
sun is shining
birds are singing , happy
little girls snicker and learn
tired of playing
daddys lap
anew rest stop
old foes
not forgotten
new life unfolds
frenetic pace nonstop
fifteen minutes too short
spring draws near
the pale green dress
catches my eyes
apples gone too soon
water dancing happily
time passes
the meat is stuck to the floor
travelling the path
to enlightenment
a red light
© 2008 Myk Malice
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| interesting to say the least. Many things seem unrelated, but in reality, everything is related. Conjuring up so many images and leaving me to read and reread. My fav is the ending. Gah, red lights on the way to transcendance....sounds like my life story! : ) Cool piece. |
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Comment by: Judy - 2008-02-19 20:36
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| Very vivid. I could see and feel your words. Good Job! |
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Comment by: - 2008-02-18 16:42
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| A great combination of haikus that all tie the seasons together nicely, giving a complete image of warmth and a subtle nostalgia. |
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