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untoldstoriesx3
Brittney Gress
United States, pa, Middletown

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The world is dark.
Empty, lonely, hopeless.
All that is surrounding is black.
Pitch black, darkest of dark, free of hue.
All is cold, dead, and desolate.
Something shines ahead…
What is this speckle of light,
Splotched on the empty, dark palette?
It is hope, shining bright and clear.
Hope for a better place,
Hope engulfing you.
Tomorrow brings a new day.
Are you prepared for what lies ahead?
The journey may seem relentless,
And all ahead may seem vast,
But follow that light of hope,
And you will find a new perspective.

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freakyfeebz Comment by: freakyfeebz - 2008-02-22 13:44
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This is really good. :)
People underestimate hope, but it is a really important thing.
untoldstoriesx3 Comment by: untoldstoriesx3 - 2008-02-21 02:12
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yeah i probably have like 5 poems total that i've titled, maybe 10. i just never really liked titling them for some reason.
thanks for the comment though, i'll check out your writing :)
sickSAM Comment by: sickSAM - 2008-02-19 08:44
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yes sometimes hope is just a tiny speckle.
I noticed this piece is untitled, is this by choice? I rarely title my writings until i post them and most of the time i just move the first line up as the title and remove it from the poem.
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