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| Well done, but if it's really Anon. how did you discover who Anon is? Janet |
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I like this one a lot.
I had coffee with Anon yesterday. We discussed the primaries here in the States, and I felt like I'd been mugged afterwards. On the way out of parking lot, he side-swiped 2 cars and the Starbucks coffee-of-the-day sign. |
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dusty tone.. really cool.
word choice could be cranked up.
the repetition of 'so' might hurt a little.
thanks,
T |
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Comment by: Juan2 - 2008-02-21 16:27
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Oh, I've read that poet - really hit or miss...
This is a clever little poem. Makes Anon feel so personable.
happy writings. |
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Comment by: alien - 2008-02-20 07:33
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That poor Anon never gets enough credit.
Nice cinquain. |
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