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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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I Am Your Angel

Come to me sweetly
take my angelic lure
give yourself
completely
to my woman child charms
a face deceptively lovely ...
I
...am your Angel

Let me hold you
mesmerized in arms
seemingly innocent
of all fraud
Close your eyes
breath deeply
and relax ...
I
...am your Angel

Let down your guard
Open your soul to me
But be prepared to bleed
For I will
Suck
You
Dry
leaving you
Empty
Hollow
And you will
Never truly
See me coming

I am disguised as Love

I
...am your Angel
And I am going to
Break
..Your
....Heart and
Bleed
..You
....Dry

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-11-21 22:04
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Thank you Devil, thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I lways appreciate that and yes love takes many guises indeed~
Comment by: - 2008-11-21 21:29
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Love is such an disguise for evil sometimes. I have experiencd that myself.

Well written.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-10-05 22:15
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Thank you kc, Soul and Lavender. I'm glad you all liked this one....I have to admit, I like it too~
Comment by: - 2008-10-05 21:04
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Wow, sneak attack, gorgeous.
soul Comment by: soul - 2008-09-26 22:55
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And so when the attention of the eye is held, the fangs can sink into the heart as stealthily as a leech to flesh.

Great piece.
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