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a big red balloon-
endless hopes of sunny days,
always keeps you going
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cup of fresh coffee,
home baked chocolate muffins-
simple love potion
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two hearts and two souls
just touching each others lives-
an unknown journey
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I would not call these Haiku, but Senryu, as they are more concerned with human nature than with nature itself. But that is nit-picking, they are good poems whatever they are called.
Nicely positive. Strictly, we're not allowed to express any emotion or deliver any message in Haiku which is why I don't write them). But so what, these are naurishing mini-poems.
