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Badlands, South Dakota
The earth,
down for the count,
laid wide open by some
Mesozoic combination
left hook
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Comment by: waxseal - 2008-03-04 11:45
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| Really fantastic! I love that area (i'm from South Dakota) and you captured it perfectly. |
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| Excellent. Powerful. Well written, and nothing to critique here. Thanks, Suzanne. J |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2008-02-28 16:12
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| It seems that this is very deep and has ancient meanings. I haven't taken the time to look it up, but it sounds like your describing a land that was perhaps stripped. |
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| I've just got to say it. My apologies to Suzanne... This little piece packs quite a wallop :p... |
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| What a strong piece, Suzanne! I particularly loved, 'some/Mesozoic combination/left hook' (sorry, Juan 2/John: didn't have a problem with 'some', which adds a touch of humour, I thought, to a great image). |
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