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kicking for cash!
I didn’t even know it was legal
For someone to be downright evil
To kick on one who is down
I hate you for what you are doing
Go on you bitches, just keep kicking
Kick a wonderful person
Come on, step up, it’s a funny game!
Come on, step up, it’s time to play!
Kick for money!
Kick for cash!
Kick the victim!
With your dead smiles…
To punish her goodness
Well that sounds fair…
To punish the helping hand
Well, if it floats your boat…
come, kick for money!
come, kick for cash!
come on my friends, come play a game!
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| Hey, I dont think you failed, and I really liked it, it was just the right length to understand what you were feeling for this person and the people hurting them but it wasnt so long that you were repeating yourself. Good job! |
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| understood...i see the kicking as perhaps meaning...'they use her/him..she/he feels abused by them-not literally...so many times people will use a nice person for what they can get from them...I have been used/abused myself by people...this is not a failed piece...i think you did well.... |
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well then i guess failed, the wictim in this poem is not me, but a person very dear to me...
and the kicking isn't meant literally... |
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| the narrator of this piece has a very aggressive tone for someone being the victim...on the one hand, i like the fact the person is not afraid of the people that come against them...on the other hand..i so much want the victim to rise up and kick back...lol..that's just me... |
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