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Spencerlindsay
spencer Lindsay
United States, California, costa mesa

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Are we passing?

Are we passing away with time
Loosing days along with mind
like people in an endless cycle
lasting away as one

or are we here for eternity
loosing synchronicity
just a soul shedding life
or are we truly gone and dead

Is this really what we are
a people asking what is life
or is it more that we live for
are we truly one with time?

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jmatych Comment by: jmatych - 2008-02-21 18:45
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Love the idea of conflict with time. there are so many possible directions to take it.
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