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Two Spinsters Weeping Bitter Tears in the Departure Lounge
Two Spinsters Weeping Bitter Tears in the Departure Lounge
We’ve brought
sensible shoes,
Sun cream, condoms (just in
case), travellers’ cheques and our passp..
Oh shit.
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I like long titles. One of my favorites is from Billy Collins: "Reading an Anthology of Chinese Poems of the Sung Dynasty, I Pause To Admire the Length and Clarity of the Titles."
I think maybe "Weeping" is redundant, but that's the only thing I'd change in this one. I particularly like "just in case." Inspired writing as usual.
