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fratjoe18
Joseph Sturgill ll
United States, South Carolina, Hilton Head Island

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One Soul

This love for you will never end

Our heart and soul will always begin

With a "I love you" forever and on

Until our lives are eternally gone

The shapes and colors I adore

The smells and flavors alore

The sway of your hair

The shine of your glare

Your eyes sparkling across the way

Sends chills through me, this I pray

Many years of happiness

Smiles, hugs, and kisses

One day I hope you'll be my Mrs.

Forever I do, never I won't

Love your soul, I wrote

Tear to tear

Eye to eye

Body to Body

Mind to mind

This spot we lye

We hold hands and gracefully fly

Our soul is one soul

Our love will always grow

I hope , my love, you will always know

Loving you will forever be my greatest role

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MarkAikins Comment by: MarkAikins - 2008-09-20 13:23
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Loving you will forever be my greatest role
>>>This line says it all. The idea of auditioning for a loving role is one i've also explored in a piece called "Audition." Hope you can read and comment on it sometime. Very passionate piece, Joe. Check it for some minor syntactical flaws I noticed, though...

Blessings.
morbidprincess Comment by: morbidprincess - 2008-02-22 20:51
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That is sooo SWEET even if im not into that lovey dovey stuff its still sweet as anything i like it
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