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morbidprincess
Colleen Tolhurst
Australia, NSW, Orange

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Why?

Why must I live in this world?
Live with all the hatred and agony,
Never is there a happy moment,
I have let my soul be consumed by hate,
My soul has now been long and forgotten,
This soul of miine is dead,
Like it was always going to happen,
Why must I live in this dimension?
No happiness to be seen,
I have slipped into darkness,
I have been consumed by depression,
But nobody knows,
They think I'm after attention,
Why must I live in hate?
To be consumed by agony?
No matter what I do,
I always seem to come back to this,
My life has turned hopeless,
So I may as well leave,
Maybe the world might change if I do,
I can't be too certain,
But this is what must happen.
Why would I live in this world?
Full of saddness and grief?
Only for everything around me
To collapse to the floor,
My home,
My life,
My soul,
Is forever gone.

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sickSAM Comment by: sickSAM - 2008-02-22 20:27
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this reads well Colleen. it has a good flow!
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