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Stephie
stephanie anderson
United States, TN, Clarksville

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Table for One

Perhaps it was the way the
extra virgin of the olive oil laid lazily
against the bed of baby greens;

Or maybe the way the server placed the lip
of the water pitcher to kiss the tip of my glass.

He comes back with a red wine for me to sip -
(sent from some male patron)
The glass intrudes upon my thoughts.

And even still, as I write:
the fragrance, shape, touch, texture
of pasta and eggplant
in its rich cream sauce linger.

I know I keep doing this -
thinking of you, desiring you, even now,
after every line I put down.

I must forgo dessert and light up a smoke -
for, despite the gesture of wine,
this lunch is casual, a table set only for me.

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aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2008-02-29 14:30
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I remember that I was online with you when you wrote this. I feel really lucky to have been able to get an insider's look into how you write and your processes of doing so.

I have seen this poem grow into what it has now become. This poem was definitely a turning point in your writing. You were changing, not only on a personal emotional level, but on a creative scale as well. I really like this one because of all the history that built up to it...as well as the future writings that I believe were somewhat derived from this moment.
sickSAM Comment by: sickSAM - 2008-02-22 21:48
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well done. excellent imagery!
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