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Stephie
stephanie anderson
United States, TN, Clarksville

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Torch Song of an Amorist

Within the heart such secrets lay!
A woman stored in candle's light
Denies the waking of the day.

Softening against the firm decay,
the mouth and nostrils thus ignite,
Within the heart such secrets lay!

The soul it feels to go astray,
To die the wick and queen of night,
Denies the waking of the day.

Morning rises, for skies ash gray,
The match no longer does excite,
Within the heart such secrets lay!

With a fiery rhetoric pray
Old Flame, rise, not blamed for sight,
Denies the waking of the day.

Sweet Candle! Seek not your spark's sway,
Bereft of love and never put right,
Within the heart such secrets lay,
Denies the waking of the day!

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aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2008-02-29 14:50
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This was done so gracefully...I feel that even if you were not purposely writing a villianelle that it would have come out like this anyway.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-02-23 04:51
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'A woman stored in candle's light'
You had me with this line
Beautiful and well wrought - like all your poetry. Thank you for sharing your work.
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