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morbidprincess
Colleen Tolhurst
Australia, NSW, Orange

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Scarred Memories

Memories of my mother,
Memories of my past,
They all haunt me,
And will continue to do so,
Until I am dead,
The things she has done,
The things she has said,
Are scarred forever on my brain,
You will never know,
Just what has happened,
The experiences that I have had,
Are all too bad for me to say,
Only one person knows the truth,
She I trust with my life,
If I were to die,
What will become of me?
Will I be stranded on this earth?
Or will I float away?
I cannot be too certian,
All I can do is wait and see,
I hide everything about myself,
especially those who are close to me,
Or those who I love,
Why must I be like this?
With nothing left to hide,
When there is so much I wish to tell,
Memories of my mother,
And of my past,
WILL HAUNT ME,
Til the day I die...

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morbidprincess Comment by: morbidprincess - 2008-10-07 14:34
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Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them to know what to do next time I post something up. Thanks
rudegrrl Comment by: rudegrrl - 2008-10-07 05:06
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you are not alone in your emotions and thoughts....thanx for sharing something so personal....a moving and honest piece.....:-)
KeepBreathing Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2008-02-24 10:18
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This has powerful emotion and it is expressed quite well throughout the whole piece though I think to make it flow better it should be separated into stanzas with some more end punctuation. That would give it a stronger, more powerful feeling. You are a good writer, though, keep it up.
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