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Harmonica
Jim Wilson
United Kingdom

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JUST FOR MY EARS

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Searching

for that intensified feeling
the natural high
brought only by

An impromptu concert
Just for my ears
I can wait years

The Maestro -
My Hero
an organic composer

His instruments
hand crafted hang from
Acer trees

In a Garden of Zen

The arrangement
created in the most natural way
for nature to play

An exqusite
long-lasting
heart-pounding
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Just for my ears

I've waited for years.
Unaccompanied
by a human hand I've
wandered this land

Waiting! to hear a song
filling the heart
of a lonely man

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nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2008-08-09 20:02
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in a garden of zen..,
you move well through the trees,
and write of them.

a natural progression of emotions.
Patty Dohle Comment by: Patty Dohle - 2008-02-24 00:57
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Really powerful! My favourite bit is: for that intensified feeling
the natural high
brought only by

An impromptu concert
Just for my ears
I can wait years.

Just gorgeous!
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