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YeOldeFart
Dennis Newman
United States, OR, Springfield

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The Pain of Death

O' Jesus, I cry'¦
We mortal men of flesh and bone
Are also buried in tombs of stone.
You died to be born again,
And say that death is not the end?
But for whom, I doth pray?
Now I die some every day.

Death is a curse on us left behind.
We suffer, we grieve, we drown in the wine.
Where is it written it is fair,
That we are left with this cross to bear?
This pain of death'¦ does it never cease?
Will our beating hearts know your peace?

Since the pleasures we gain in life
Are but fleeting reprieves from pain and strife,
The lure of death is peace '¦
And freedom from pain,
The promise of joy on the fruited plain.
Why? Why Lord, why? Why should we survive?
It seems so pointless to stay alive.

All our life we work, struggle, and strain,
And protect our loved ones from the furious rain.
We find satisfaction in our sacrifice
To ensure their earthly paradise.
Is that blasphemy, Lord? Is it a sin?
Is the pain of death a discipline?

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JoanneMitch37 Comment by: JoanneMitch37 - 2007-11-06 03:30
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Pain is pleasure? Grief is joy?
I love the way you wrote that - sure it is not all you feel, but you kept to the theme and the verse - great! Its inspirational too...
Comment by: - 2007-09-23 00:01
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Wow Dennis. This is one powerful Poem. Strong emotions, I haven't read anything this powerful since I read "Still I Rise" From Maya Angelou
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-09-06 00:12
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Dennis this is wonderful. I have had these feelings, these thoughts. The pain fo death . I felt this so much when my father died . Very emotional poem brought a tear to my eye but again gives a feeling of hope , of peace.

Well done

Anne
poetress411 Comment by: poetress411 - 2007-08-25 19:39
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Do you struggle with your poetry Dennis? Does every line flow freely from your pen? In any event, this poem is exquisite.

A million hugs
Julia
Tayo Comment by: Tayo - 2007-08-21 08:18
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This is realy a nice work, full of knowledge and inspirations.
I so much love the 2nd & 3rd lines of stanza One-
"We mortal men of flesh and bone
Are also buried in tombs of stone."

Here is a question to ALL. 'Should we be afraid of death?'
I suggest the first answer and I welcome more-
When you die daily there is no need to fear death.
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