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untoldstoriesx3
Brittney Gress
United States, pa, Middletown

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Illumination, original version

Sheer beauty,
Slowly seeps inside me.
The light becomes brighter until suddenly—
I abruptly realize from where the illumination stems.
Burning candle.

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DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-03-03 13:21
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right on
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-02-24 16:43
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Hi, very good write. Could you please tell me how to write poems of this sort? Best wishes.
KAnne Comment by: KAnne - 2008-02-24 06:23
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Loved the imagery. Great job!
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