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Boonrassi
Timothy Briggs
United States, fl, ft lauderdale

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Liquid shadows shifted along the Bishops' robes; fat, dusty columns circled the Council of Nicaea.

Darts of candle light danced on parchment and struck the words of Jesus. “Let no middle man come between us, the only church is under the stars.”

Emperor Constantine's lips twisted, “That won't do.” He nodded to his scribes. "Fix it."

The Bishops shuffled, mute; dust spiraled above torches; silence boomed.

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EnigmaticAmor Comment by: EnigmaticAmor - 2008-04-02 10:04
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Loved it! Perfection, Tim. Honestly.
Ash19640 Comment by: Ash19640 - 2008-03-09 13:44
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Did you win with this one Tim? Loved this line: 'fat, dusty columns circled the Council of Nicaea'> I can vividly imagine the whole attitude of these men Tim. Excellent.
vlclasby Comment by: vlclasby - 2008-03-05 21:15
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Not much to say that hasn't been said. Marvelous. I've read it several times, and it's just incredibly rich.
flack47 Comment by: flack47 Online- 2008-03-05 18:40
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What can I say about this?

Solid. Near as I can tell, flawless.

Rock
--Mh
Fireballems Comment by: Fireballems - 2008-03-05 11:29
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the conciseness of this, along with its vivid imagery really make it impressive.

//Liquid shadows shifted along the Bishops' robes

such a fantastic image
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