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Finishing Touch Wee Challenge
Her head tilted to the right then to the left. She looked almost like an adult as she backed up, held her arm straight out, thumb in the air like an artist measuring her model. For the finishing touch, she licked her fingers and plastered them across the front of her sister’s cropped hair.
And for the final finishing touch her mom plastered her backside. She did not grow up to be a hairdresser.
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Comment by: Cherley - 2008-03-01 13:32
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| Thanks ladies. I appreciate your reads and suggestions. It even makes me smile, each time I read it. |
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Comment by: karjon - 2008-03-01 13:01
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Yeah, that ties it up and gives it an ending, Cherley (and me a smile).
Cheers
Karen |
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| Cher'ley, I am sitting her chuckling as I read this. My daughter and her friend did this to every doll in the house last summer and then they tried it out on themselves. A very fun relate. Nice work. |
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| I remember doing it to my eyebrows. OUCH. What a whipping I got. You have a bunch of words available, so go for it, Cherley, and come up with another line or two. J |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2008-02-27 13:46
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| I could add and for the final "Finishing Touch", her mom plastered her hand across her little bottomside. That would make it a complete story right? |
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