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shaft
Matthew Jackson
United Kingdom, Lancashire, Preston

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Cross

A cross, burning brightly in the distance,
I'm looking from a point far away,
But in the right place.
No more country for the righteous,
No more gold for the coffers of lies.

A robe splattered with deceivers blood,
An old man lies dead,
A fascist responsible for death,
And no eternal rest awaits those,
Blinded by the sparkle,
Of the baubles and trinkets.
Black smoke trails in the sky.

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Comment by: - 2006-05-09 15:41
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Yes-say it like it is-great piece.
Carli Comment by: Carli - 2006-03-21 15:34
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That's very dark and very beautiful. I like it.
Good Work!!
Rae Comment by: Rae - 2006-03-17 01:00
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ooo, very enjoyable. I love the descriptions..and the imagery...the figurative language. I find this too, excellent, and agree with Kamereon...very haunting and powerful, emotional and refective. I especially like::

"Of the baubles and trinkets
Black smoke trails in the sky"

It rings true to me as being a solid and wonderful ending to such a piece. thank you so very much for posting this =)
Comment by: - 2006-03-15 05:06
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Good Brother! We are waiting for more!
kamereon Comment by: kamereon - 2006-03-08 10:22
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Haunting and powerful, a truly emotional and reflective piece.
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