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thecandystore
Christina Jamie Peroca
United States, New York, -

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a Dream

blue Fields
white Grass
calm Wind
quiet Birds

no, wait...

blue Corn in blue Fields brings blue Moods i Can't yield
white Grass is White snow That
calm Wind blows

quiet Birds are Birds left Silent, the Victims of Violence

is That a Garden?

fuck! Thorns

it was only a dream

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kidquando Comment by: kidquando - 2008-05-19 21:00
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There are some very visual elements here, but I think it deserves expansion. Or not.
Quick question about the photo?
Are you on a roof? You must be there is a shadow of a sattelite, but are ther realy building that blue in the city?
RJA
Apollo Comment by: Apollo - 2008-04-28 21:20
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such is life...
sickSAM Comment by: sickSAM - 2008-04-25 00:45
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i enjoyed this one CP. oh the wild thoughts that go through one's head.
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